Wednesday 9 September 2020

Should Milk At Awapuni School Be Banned?

I really like doing persuading writing, because it gets my mind think very hard. I had to copy and paste my work from my google doc that was the easy part. The hard part i my persuading writing was when I was had to move my text to somewhere else because i  just thought that they weren't good where they were but now i have made my writing better.

1 comment:

  1. Hello Misty I really like the way how you done words we should banned milk, This gives me a memory of why we should banned plastic milks, Maybe next time you should add more words so I understand some information from your writing about banning milk.

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